Are these two paragraphs grammatically right?

Question

1. When a word ending in a vowel sound is next to one beginning with a vowel sound, they are
connected with a glide between the two vowels. A glide is either a slight [y] sound or a slight [w]
sound. How do you know which one to use? This will take care of itself—-the position your lips
are in will dictate either [y] or [w].

2. Bent-over nails are sometimes said to be clenched, but are more often clinched.


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Answer 1

On the evening of that day, the first day of the week, the doors being shut where the disciples were, for fear of the Jews, Jesus came and stood among them and said to them, "Peace be with you." When he had said this, he showed them his hands and his side. Then the disciples were glad when they saw the Lord. Jesus said to them again, "Peace be with you. As the Father has sent me, even so I send you." And when he had said this, he breathed on them, and said to them, "Receive the Holy Spirit. If you forgive the sins of any, they are forgiven; if you retain the sins of any, they are retained."

Answer 2

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